The first Noah built a mud boat in preparation for the flood.
The Ark melted and sank.
The second Noah built a wooden boat in preparation for the flood.
The Ark was struck by lightning and burned.
The third Noah built a bronze boat in preparation for the flood.
The Ark sank because it was overweight.
The animals thought.
If we rely on Noah, we will die.
The Holy Beast took command and built a dike.
And all the animals were able to live safely.
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Now that is an interesting take on the story. Very creative.
Thank you.
Noah might have had no problem if he had only helped humans. Except for the mud boats.
haha, true, mud melts in water- lol!
Now, I thought the beast busted the dyke, and everybody drowned.
Such a story would be interesting.Nice idea!
I smiled. I’ve often thought animals to be more useful and worthy than some of the human species. An interesting write rin.
Thank you very much.
I read your poems very often.
Your poems work well with machine translation, and there are very few mistranslations.
I can understand the poetic sentiment and your point of view.
Thank you 🙂
Nice write, Rin.
Thank you for reading!
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