love it feels like paradise when it comes to you
filled with lots of feelings that you never knew
melts your heart away gets stronger everyday
takes you to paradise a million miles away
bonded heart and soul for your whole through
growing even stronger your paradise come true
each and every day for eternity
in love for evermore two hearts will always be
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jim56 (
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Sweet and romantic this poem reads well and has a longing feeling to it. Lovely
thankyou for lovely comment
means a lot
Lovely write Jim. Love is all you need. Can you remember the Beatles song? Your poem is beautifully romantic, love at its best transports to paradise. Have a beautiful day today. We have sunshine.
as the beatles said all you need is love
im an old romantic at heart
hi Cassie hope you ok
weather cloudy little bit of sun not much
cold but thats winters way
hope you keeping warm around the fire
cat got hot water bottle and pjyamas now
what next
thanks for always lovely comment
stay safe chill keep warm jim xx
Keep that cat happy Jim. She’ll be cooking your dinner next. 😂. You are spoiling her. Keep warm.
never thought of that i will ask her lol
keep warm stay safe xx
Excellent write Jim
thanks for comment
You're welcome
Some things are nice .. some things are painful . Nice poem anyway.. Take care
thankyou for comment you take care to
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