Blue lives apart from the colours that are a part of her
living away from the smiling sky
the waves of the sea
away from the colours that she knows
maybe blues meant to be with the smiling sky
with the waves of the sea
yet blues standing away from others like her
meant to be with the colours that are like her
similar or alike
blue isn’t meant to be inside
or sighing
meant ti be with the natural blues outside
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes we just feel that bit removed from things ..
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Living away from the smiling sky. Feeling apart from the full picture. Can’t be a pleasant experience. You express those feelings well Caring Dove. Final stanza says it all. Have a good day today.
Thanks Cassie I guess I was trying to talk of that feeling of being detached from myself and things .. it is difficult and can make me feel alone and sad . Thanks for your kindness
I came looking for a new poem, but saw that this is the last you wrote.
Yeah , I may write one later and post it
Good write Dove.
Thankyou )
A emotional poem, well written
Thanks for the kind comment
You are very welcome
Well written and expressed
Thanks Tony )
You're welcome
Excellent write, my friend! I love the dual meaning of blue...the natural, beautiful color and the then the haunting, depressed, inner state. Well done! I am praying your blueness goes away my friend. I really appreciate your work. 🌹👏
Thanks for the supportive kind words . Yeah I think it’s the calming blue , then the sad blue . Being away from where I’m meant to be .. from myself , or away from more happiness . Difficult when we feel sad ,
Yes. Very difficult indeed. I am sorry that you feel this way, my friend..and for all of us who struggle with melancholy in any form! 🤗 ❤️🩹
...and don't forget the comfort that comes from the Blues! Nice work.
Thanks for the nice comment
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