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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

isn't it interesting

lines are typically fine

not considered ugly

not considered bad

unless I make them myself

on my own skin

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 2nd, 2024 21:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: where does society draw the line?
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Where society draws lines is usually over the throats of the marginalized, including, but not obviously limited to, those with mental illness. A very poginant question in your note…but wow does your poem hit home. Loved the strikethrough, btw, cery effective! 🙏❤️

    • NinjaGirl

      boy was the first line of that comment deep-- agree and appreciate the insight

    • Poetic Licence

      May only be a few lines, but very hard hitting, nice write



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