isn't it interesting
lines are typically fine
not considered ugly
not considered bad
unless I make them myself
on my own skin
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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- Comment from author about the poem: where does society draw the line?
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Where society draws lines is usually over the throats of the marginalized, including, but not obviously limited to, those with mental illness. A very poginant question in your note…but wow does your poem hit home. Loved the strikethrough, btw, cery effective! 🙏❤️
boy was the first line of that comment deep-- agree and appreciate the insight
May only be a few lines, but very hard hitting, nice write
thank you
You are very welcome
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