What ! I wonder is this Poem about,
As I’m climbing the Walls in working it out.
A few nice words are here and there,
The Odd Choice Rhyme that we all could bare.
A Meter that’s pleasant if not to fine,
A description of sorts of the Metaphor kind.
It isn’t Blank and neither Free,
Makes a pleasing tone to some degree.
Stanzas laid to help redeem,
And make a sort of Singalong Scheme.
It’s the English Weather on a Summer’s day,
All ‘Sun Factor 10’ and ‘Rain Stopped Play’.
There are some parts of Middling-Verse,
Though I must admit I’ve written worst.
But of a Banded Subject I’m really stumped,
It’s different things in a Messy Lump.
I’m sure the next Poem will benefit best,
By a correlation of Theme that’s better addressed.
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Author:
Kevin Hulme (
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Comments3
This poem delightfully captures the perplexity and charm of trying to unravel the meaning behind poetic lines. Its playful tone and self-aware commentary create an engaging reading experience. It's a relatable piece for anyone who has ever found themselves lost in the layers of a poem, appreciating its parts but struggling to grasp the whole. It also reflects on the need for a cohesive theme in future works is a thoughtful takeaway, highlighting the balance between structure and creativity. Well done sir.
Sometimes you scratch your head and think ‘What can I write about’?
So I wrote about this Poem .
Thanks for Reading.
And in due course these poems sort themselves out!
It may appear to be a mish of a poem, but it is not, i enjoyed the read. I think when looking back on this you will find the basis for other poems laying within. Good read, thank you
I liked the Idea that the Poem was about the Poem itself.
Thank you for Reading and your Comment.
Excellent write
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
You're welcome
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