I heard you screaming in your mind
which turned to echoes after time.
Wicked dreams from the start
rushing blood through the heart.
Cold dark kisses on your head
from the spirit of the dead.
I heard her laugh as she cast a spell
from the depths where demons dwell.
She whispered loudly in your ear
so close that she could smell your fear.
No need to run, you can't hide
darkness lingers, souls collide.
I tried to turn the other way
voices demanded I should stay
Panic struck as I realized
I was you, just in disguise.
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A very cleverly written poem and enjoyable read, Thank you
Thank you very much!
You are very welcome
Great rhythm, vivid imagery and a surprise ending in this dark tale. Very nicely penned teardrop. Well done.
Thank you Cassie
A wonderful poem of our own internal panic and anxiety. When we stop and take a good look, we see that it only comes from inside of us. Very nicely written with great rhyme and flow.
Thank you so much for reading me.
Stunning...I hope it manages to convey my thoughts...
Thank you for reading me
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