Words to self
that are negative , critical
are almost
like the loud wind
speaking
they are not gentle
like the breeze breathing kindly
they aren’t helping you
yet somehow you
find yourself
being away from the gentle breeze
being like that little bit harsh towards yourself
then you wander why
why, when it’s not helping
because we find ourselves
in a place of not feeling our best
not feeling like ourselves
lacking in confidence
we should speak to ourselves
gently
like the breeze
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes we go back to feeling sejf critical but that doesn’t always help I found mysejf feeling that way earlier today
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I think those negative feelings are quite common Caring Dove. You are a beautiful person and you deserve to have a gentle breeze, no loud noise. Be kind to yourself. This poem conveys your emotions well to this reader. Wishing you better.
Cassie ) I do try and be kind to myself but sometimes I notice criticism again .
Thanks for your kind words
Keep telling yourself you deserve to be happy and content. Look in the mirror and say it.
We should be more gentle to ourselves…be more loving and empathetic. Without doubt! I know I needed to read this. Well done, Caring Dove! Thank you for your vulnerability! ❤️🙏 Wishing you that gentle breeze.
Thankyou so much 🙂 I try to be gentle with myself but sometimes I find myself going back to being critical or feeling that way , it doesn’t help tho
We should be kind to ourselves
Appreciate your kind comment
Another poem, touched with emotion. It all to easy to be oversensitive when we are feeling down and beat ourselves up, but follow Cassie advice and look in that mirror. All the best
Thanks so much for the kind words . Yeah I have been feeling a bit tired and down at times ( which hasn’t helped )
Appreciate your kindness thanks
You are very welcome
A wonderful poem,
thoughts, emotions
and advice I must say!!👍
Yes we should all speak
to ourselves
gently like the breeze
that is the best way! 💯
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad
Yes, at times we might be more horrible to ourselves than we are to others and think: 'I would never say that to him/her, but I say it to myself at times'. Or we might balance the negative and the positive things we say to ourselves.
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