Trinity

rin

Jesus Christ spit into heaven

Unluckily, the spit got on God's face

God got angry and said he would stop the Trinity

The Holy Spirit, panicked, intervened

”Let's decide by majority vote”

As a result, the Trinity ceased to exist

  • Author: rin (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 8th, 2024 02:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: used DeepL
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    How interesting a concept which shall probably remain hypothetical, interesting nonetheless.

    • rin

      Thank you. I don't write my thoughts, I just press Like and Favo button)
      This poem is both a hypothesis and an allegory.
      The suggestion of the Holy Spirit seems to be the best way, but in fact it leads us down the wrong route.

    • Lorenz

      I am the sane holy spirit !







      • rin

        Is it sane Lorenz you have thrust into the fountain?
        Or is it the mad Lorenz?

        Both of them.

      • sorenbarrett

        Ahh I love poems like this. In its ambiguity, it leaves much room for thought. Did God overrule the majority rule and move on or did the Holy Spirit vote with God? To get out the meaning of the poem, one must return to the first sentence. Why did Christ spit into heaven? And within that question, lies the answer. A wonderful poem

        • rin

          There is a Japanese saying, “spit in the sky"
          Essentially, it ributmeans that if one does something dirty, retion will come to him or her.
          If Jesus Christ did it, it would reach heaven.
          What Jesus Christ really wanted to do was to use his doctrine to help those in need, so the doctrine itself is not so important, so they let him do dirty things.

          Your reflections always make me feel comfortable. I really appreciate it.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you for your added information. I learned something and that is always wonderful

          • Tony36

            Great write

            • rin

              Thank you.
              Your prof picture are great too.

              • Tony36

                You're welcome

              • Jerry Reynolds

                Unlucky God— great concept, Rin.

                • rin

                  The idea came to me in a flash.
                  Glad you complimented me on the concept.

                • rengoku

                  • rin

                    Thank you!

                  • rengoku

                    interesting …
                    but Tokyo is a cool place

                    • rin

                      I sometimes go to urban areas in Tokyo. I'm surprised to see that even in Shibuya, Shinjuku, Ikebukuro and other areas, there are now stores and exhibitions dealing in anime and manga. If you have the chance to come to Tokyo, please be sure to check them out.

                      • rengoku

                        ok haha



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