swimming through sand

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

think think think

but I cant

its a brick wall in my head

impossible

those tiny pieces of glass

cut me

while I try to fight and swim

to the surface

its so hard to push against

all this sand

 

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  • Poetic Licence

    this resonates with me, wellwritten

    • NinjaGirl

      I'm glad someone can relate, thank you

    • sorenbarrett

      They say that if one finds oneself in quicksand one should swim. Very nicely written this poem of frustration and pain. I can feel it in the words and the effort as if walking into the face of a hurricane. It is this feeling that I get from it that makes it a work of art

      • NinjaGirl

        thank you, yes it is chaotic like a hurricane

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Wonderfully done, friend! I can relate to this…deeply! 🌹👏

        • NinjaGirl

          thank you dear, sad that you can relate but I'm glad I'm not the only one!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Yes...indeed...good to not be alone! Struggling sucks...but struggling alone: The. Worst. You are welcome, dear friend!



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