think think think
but I cant
its a brick wall in my head
impossible
those tiny pieces of glass
cut me
while I try to fight and swim
to the surface
its so hard to push against
all this sand
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NinjaGirl (
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Comments3
this resonates with me, wellwritten
I'm glad someone can relate, thank you
They say that if one finds oneself in quicksand one should swim. Very nicely written this poem of frustration and pain. I can feel it in the words and the effort as if walking into the face of a hurricane. It is this feeling that I get from it that makes it a work of art
thank you, yes it is chaotic like a hurricane
Wonderfully done, friend! I can relate to this…deeply! 🌹👏
thank you dear, sad that you can relate but I'm glad I'm not the only one!
Yes...indeed...good to not be alone! Struggling sucks...but struggling alone: The. Worst. You are welcome, dear friend!
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