I see a blackbird
Brightly clear outside the window
a blackbird , nights sky with just a speck of yellow
shining near to her voice
where her voice lives lightly
and she sings whenever she wishes
like the nights sky
yet shining so softly
appearing so soft with a small speck of yellow light
living near to her voice
her beak , a lovely little sunshine yellow
living in the outside green world
with the berries outside the window
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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Yes, lovely write Dove.
Thankyou orchidee )
A really nice read to start the day, Thank you
Thanks ))
You are very welcome
Beautiful words here. We have blackbirds in our garden. They sing beautifully and never fail to cheer me up with their song. A lovely poem for a Wednesday morning. Thank you Caring dove.
Thankyou Cassie 🙂 I didn’t hear her singing yesterday but yeah saw her eating the berries .. their lovely birds
I see her in full view thanks to your descriptive poem. Well done friend. The desire to be free like a bird…(who knows how they feel about themselves) comes through in this for me. Love this observational piece. AgIn, well done! 🌹👏 Faved!
Thanks for the supportive comment ) I just think blackbirds are beautiful .. and I guess I like writing about nature
Thankyou 🙂
Indeed, they are! Black is beautiful. Blackbirds...ravens...black cats (now the birds fly away...lol). Anyway, you are welcome my friend! Nature is a wonderful muse!
I don’t like ravens or crows .. yeah , nature is inspiring .
Ah...fair enough...they're my fave. Something do do with death and Edgar Allan Poe. 😉🐦⬛ And I find them beautiful...if not obnoxiously loud! LOL!
They can be quite loud , yeah
Blackbirds seem to be nicer , ..
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Great write
Thanks Tony 🙂
You're welcome
Bright as sunshine! Lovely read.
Thankyou 🙂
Glad you enjoyed my poem
They are lovely birds
You are most welcome. And yes, there are lovely birds! Brings me back as well to that famous song...
Most familiar description of an image branded in many of our brains. I have seen this on so many occasions. Wonderfully described it leaves the thought of metaphor as well. The birds parallel with the night is well done and the meaning of the separation of the pain of glass between the author, and the bird is most interesting.
Thanks for your lovely comment ,))glad you enjoyed my poem
Yes , sometimes I feel that divide between me and other things .. but not always .
It’s always nice to see or hear birds tho ..
Thankyou
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