Mistakes

vividvoid14

You can't see Stars in the day

The sun shines to bright, but at night

You see the universes true light.

Humans make mistakes

It's our magic, it's how we create.

So don't beat yourself up. 

Don't doubt your talents.

Forget about your appearance

We all die one day

You don't need to impress the people who leave

You need to be your own vision of  ecstasy.

Before you mistakes can make anything in reality.

Broken, and broken mistakes

Maybe everyone needs a little fix

 

 

 

 

  • Author: nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2024 02:23
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 32
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  • MR.apocalypse

    Very good

  • rin

    That's a good message. I thought about it a lot.

    • vividvoid14

      Sweet! Thanks for reading

      • rin

        Due to machine translation, "you" is replaced with "me."

      • TobaniNataiella

        We all have faults in ourself that need repair, as best you can always be yourself, nicely expressed poem, thank you

        • vividvoid14

          Thanks, really glad you liked it

          • TobaniNataiella

            You are very welcome

          • Tony36

            Great write

            • vividvoid14

              Thanks for reading!

              • vividvoid14

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Parisab

                  Your words are maturing and your spirit is always pure and you! Shine on, Vivid!

                  • vividvoid14

                    Thank you, Parisab!!



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