Went to work today
Only to find dismay
Feelings so very wrong
Under the surface they dance and play
First it was Stan, then it was Shaun
On one lonely weekday, both, gone
Who could have ever predicted this day
Empty times, when all is so very wrong
The enemy hovers over everything, it seems
No hindrances, full reign, as they tease
They do as they please, and we stand in awe
Frozen, just staring, they do as they please
They do as they please
Memento Vivere
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Author:
Eugene S. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 13th, 2024 21:08
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Comments2
Does the head swallow the tail?
Or the tale gets stuck in the Throat?
Note sure why I wrote that.
Maybe a little of both, and maybe a little too easily or readily.
Maybe?
A touching and emotional poem, well written
Thank you for the kind critique.
You are very welcome
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