The Prophet’s Eye

Demar Desu

get your eyes use to

the calm, to patience, let things

come to you with love

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 14th, 2024 08:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: spirituality…
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 18
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said

    • Demar Desu

      Ahh, I love the that Taoist, he knew what’s up. Yet this poem is inspired by Friedrich Nietzsche

    • TobaniNataiella

      As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.

      • Demar Desu

        As I get older my patience seems to be getting better because of this realization…

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏

        • Demar Desu

          Thank you bro, recently I had an internet critic try to correct my spelling. LOL as if I cannot correct myself… poets know how every letter and word is deliberate

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Oh...for sure my man! No doubt we do! 🤣

          • Tony36

            Great write

            • Demar Desu

              Thank you T36!

              • Tony36

                You're welcome

              • vicecream

                Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder



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