creature

rin

I have succeeded in genetic engineering
I have created a creature
It's called an ammonite
There are already ammonites
It's a bit confusing as to which is the real ammonite

But archaeologists were the first to discover
Was one that I had created

  • Author: rin (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 15th, 2024 01:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: used DeepL
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  • TobaniNataiella

    Pause for thought

    • rin

      I wrote it because I thought a simple story could be written in an interesting way.

      • TobaniNataiella

        And it can

      • sorenbarrett

        God in poetry. Creating makes one its god so to speak.

        • rin

          The authors are in a position to write about anything they want to write about, but each one has a different personality.

        • arqios

          Interesting interplay here; the dynamic between the creature and the creator plus the observer and their creations. Omoshiroi 👍🏻

          • rin

            Thank you for always giving me good comments.
            Thank you everyone for commenting and reading.
            Arigatou

            • arqios

              It's hard not to, your work is very engaging and comes as a result of deep thought and exploration. So I thank you to for interacting and diving into my work which is not always the typical mind's fare. I am hoping DeepL to improve for better communication. Peace 🙂

            • Cassie58

              A puzzle, but you gave me great memories of collecting ammonites with a grandson, thrown on to a beach in Dorset after a stormy night. A precious memory.



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