observance

arqios

In the heart of winter, I stand,

Surrounded by a landscape of white silence.

The snow blankets the earth,

Each flake a delicate touch,

Soft, yet unyielding

in its cold embrace.

 

The trees are skeletal fingers,

Reaching up to a sky of muted gray,

Their limbs bare, stripped of life,

Yet beautiful in their stark simplicity.

I watch, an observer, detached,

My breath visible in the frigid air.

 

I do not impose

warmth upon the scene,

Nor do I seek comfort in its cold beauty.

I accept it, as it is,

A world of stillness and quiet.

 

In this frozen moment,

I find clarity, a vision unclouded

By the warmth of human emotion.

The winter world speaks in whispers,

Its language one of stillness,

A silent meditation on existence.

 

I stand, HuMan in the snow,

In tune with the cold,

Seeing the world without colour,

Without sound, without feeling,

still seeking all the same

to understand.

 

 

 

 

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  • Mutley Ravishes

    Keep on standing, and rolling, Arqios!

  • sorenbarrett

    We strip the bones bare to understand the structure and see beyond the surface. Yet arriving at the core in simplicity we see that we are all what we are and in that beauty acceptance a cold stark truth, undeniable all are part of the same nature. A lovely poem and a fave my friend

    • arqios

      Yes! "we are all what we are!" that's so very true. Thanks dear Soren ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Cryptic

      • Paul Bell

        I always think the snow comes down to cover up bad gardens, if only for a time.
        Winter sure is the reflection time, good or bad.
        We promise ourselves change, and some manage, most don't.

        • arqios

          I have shared that cover up that on several occasions. Good of you to voice that out, Paul. A neutral reflection that stirs up promises and change, an excellent insight. ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™

        • orchidee

          Good write A.

          • arqios

            thanks so much O๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Arqios, this is stark and contemplative. It feels stripped down to essentialsโ€ฆno sentiment, no adornment, just still presence. The restraint gives it real gravity. Well done, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

            • arqios

              It was a hope that restraint allows the reader to supply and fill out the poem in their experiencing of it. An attempt at intrinsically participative poetry. Thanks T, as always ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Amenโ€ฆand you pulled it off, dear friend!



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