in the mood for love

Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏


Notice of absence from Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
depression has me now… I’m done writing here

sigh…I miss my wife 

missing my girlfriend also

ah… if only I- 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2024 07:14
  • Category: Haiku
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  • arqios

    If only!

  • sorenbarrett

    Those if only's wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!

  • Tony36

    Excellent write

  • Cassie58

    Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.

  • Mutley Ravishes

    Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.

    • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

      Haha if only!

      • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

        Mutley I think I know what you mean!! Energy??

        • Mutley Ravishes

          For sure! I've recently become aware that I can't redirect that energy upwards. However, something else can.
          Season's greetings!

          • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

            I’m going to practice that, thank you for your wisdom and definitely happy holidays. Glad we are both still around. Take care my friend

            • Mutley Ravishes

              You too. Here's a late Christmas "present" for you ! : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W1z3fSCAzUs



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