slipping slowly
through your fingers
I fade away
Supposed to live
but not wanting life
losing myself
to remember who I am
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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Great write
thanks!
You're welcome
Dark and sad it speaks of uncertainty and a need to be oneself. To find oneself one must loose oneself. A deep poem with a haunting quality.
thank you!
Sad words about trying to find a purpose, few words but powerful
the shortest messages seem to sting the most. thanks for reading!
You are very welcome
Ooh..."losing myself to remember who I am". 🤯 There you go with your master Ninja skills, stealthily sneaking that last line in at the end and taking the meaning of the poem to whole new levels. TOTAL NINJA MOVE...just saying, 🤣 This, my friend, is a hauntingly brilliant and profound write that deals with love, loss, and rediscovering who one is apart from another person. Moving from co-dependence to independence, perhaps?. Seriously. It is a wonderful example of how so much can be said in so few words. Brava! 🌹👏
thank you, though I wonder how few words I can use before it becomes something that already exists...
That is a good and philosophical question right there. 🤔 if you discover the answer, do share! 😂 Anyway, you’re welcome, my friend!
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