Before dad died, Neas made a promise. One he plans on keeping. Something he and his dad have in common. Neas has made retribution to all he’s hurt but one. Though he’s much older now, he knows the damage that’s been done. Words have more power than one would believe. Neas said some pretty rotten things about a girl he befriended; he was quite mean. He may have only been fifteen at the time. But he’s not forgotten how he made his once best friend cry. Last Neas knew she was still at home with her mom and dad. He tried googling her phone number. Nothing. Next he tries the address. Here he finds exactly what he’s looking for. Better to make amends face to face right? What could possibly go wrong? You see the connection? Life has many twists and winding roads; want to see how this works out for Neas? Come back tomorrow!
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Author:
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ (
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To be forgiven, they have to want to forgive you, another enjoyable read
This is true. Let’s see what the story brings
Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We'll have to see what happens as the saga like the road unwinds
Aww 🥰 thank you
BRAVO
Thank you Tony
You're welcome
Good write GS.
Thank you my friend
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