Can You See.
You cannot see.
What I can see
Because you ignore me.
If you could see.
What I can see.
Would you think differently.
Is it because you can't see.
What I can see.
That you continue to judge me.
If you tried to see.
What I can see.
You might get to know me.
Then you could see.
What I can see.
Then I would think differently.
Nataiella 1979
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Oh, now here is a mantra of my being! It also sums up quite neatly a major reason why poetry became part of me as a child. thank you for sharing! P.S. the year stamped marks the general time that I began to write as a novice, the early seventies really.
Thank you for your comment, i started early in 70`s, i think it saved me many a time from just giving in. Your feedback is always appreciated.
You are much welcome friend 🙏🏻
Blindingly brilliant .. & no kidding .. exceptionally well done my friend .. Neville 👍
Thank you for your feedback, as always much appreciated
A very nice and impressive reflection , provokes many thoughts and emotions... Like
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
I like reading your poetry. You write as I do, experiences and emotions. I too started writting as a child, to me, it was my only release. Thank you for the read. I enjoyed it!
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated. Without writing as a child i would never had made it.
So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be no need for judgement.
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Love it! 😍
A wonderful poem
really thought provoking too! 🤔
Learning to write poetry
helped me "to see"
more clearly things through! 😊
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed thank you,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated
Very impressive, my friend! Seriously love the way you played with the word “see”. Well done! 🌹👏
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated as always
You are welcome, Tobani!
Now I see. Nice write TN.
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
So much wisdom in these words Tobani. And so well written, a long time ago too. Much appreciated.
Yes it was a lifetime ago, but i feel it still applies. thank you Cassie for your feedback, very much appreciated as always, enjoy your evening
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