Don’t give up they tell me
Isn’t it so easy to tell someone that?
Keep going, you can do this!
Can I really, how would you know?
Drowning in school work it seems
Drowning in family drama themes
Drowning in me and God’s dreams
Overachiever more like overthinker
I set my goals and they set me back
Eat me up just to throw them up
Can I never accept it all
Only let it all consume me
Though there's nothing left to consume.
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I think...I feel like if I give up on myself...then it was my choice and I'm in control
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Comments4
Overwhelmed it is easy to throw in the towel and give up. Persistence is the best choice.
best to throw the towel in the washer so you're ready to grab it and grit again
very nice
thanks
Nicely written piece
thank you
You are very welcome
It is amazingly awesome
thank you!
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