Notice of absence from Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
depression has me now… I’m done writing here
depression has me now… I’m done writing here
everything around
will bring more understanding
to how physics work
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: People say haikus are suppose to be about nature… but to me everything including us is nature. That means we are not separated from nature if anything I believe we are one with everything and everything is one with us… we are half of the world the world is half of us which allows us to be one. That being said no offense to the Japanese but I make my own rules when it comes to haikus
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You have a good point and I agree categories are made by man and to be broken. A marvelous Haiku
Thanks for understanding!
Interesting read, we should behave as we are all one, but do we?, enjoyed the read
Maybe if we did world peace would happen sooner, unfortunately it’s faster for anger to seep than love to dwell. Thanks for the comment brother
You are very welcome
What can I say…respect🫡
Thank you! I respect you!
Hahaha! You know the rules...and of course...rules are made to be broken! Love that spirit bro! I also love this haiku and agree with your assessment that nothing is outside of nature. Just because something is beyond our understanding does not mean it is unnatural. So yeah...💯 Well put. Now, keep breaking those fucking rules! LOL!
Hahaha! I swear you got that right for sure🤘🏽I hope this explanations makes my future and past poems make more sense 🥳
Love it
Love you T dawg!
You're welcome
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