Requiem for Real

rebellion_in_sanity

Maybe she said something 
Maybe it was a "sorry"
One where the words were spoken 
Her eyes, her face frozen 
Never showed that she meant

 

Her words, the wallflowers
Weave magic in its poignancy 
Beauty that of a face painted
Each inch, over and over
No one knows what lies within 

 

Never could get her on your wavelength 
Maybe, you were never meant to
Life has evolved beautifully
Each to own is how we should 

 

Celebrate life in being artificial
Words, feelings, looks rarely true
Artificial intelligence will take us far
Maybe we need artificial parents too

 

  • Author: Rebellion In Sanity (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 20th, 2024 05:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: I feel really sorry when people try to say AI is the future
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye of the beholder

    • rebellion_in_sanity

      Thank you very much for the read and your observation. Appreciate your support

    • TobaniNataiella

      I think some people already have artificial parents without the need for A1, the poem makes you think of what might become, enjoyed the read.

      • rebellion_in_sanity

        Thank you very much for your observation. Appreciate your support

        • TobaniNataiella

          You are very welcome

        • cellinic

          A very intelligent and sincere statement. Thank you very much for it. Best wishes,

          • rebellion_in_sanity

            I deeply appreciate your time and support. Thank you!

          • Cassie58

            There is no place in literature for AI. It has its place but it canโ€™t replace human emotion. I accept it has its uses, but the thought of AI parents is a nightmare scenario. We are all unique. The future looks cloned. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.

            • rebellion_in_sanity

              Deeply appreciate your observations and support. Thank you very much

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Very thought provoking poem and note, my friend. I am not anti-tech or even anti-AI if used appropriately. To replace human presence, thinking, creativity and creative output...not at all! Oh...and that's a hell no on replacing parents! LOL! Though, it might do better than TVs and Smart Devices have! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜ญ All jokes aside, well done on this friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

              • rebellion_in_sanity

                Paradoxically I designed AI system (more like machine learning though). After a while I started wondering atleast the world had Openheimer to apologise for making the atom bomb, but who will we have to apologise for the massacre being uleashed on us due to indiscriminate and uncontrolled use of AI for profit motive?

                Deeply appreciate your observations and support. Thank you very much

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Neat! Oh...I totally hear you there, my friend..and the truth is...not sure anyone will take the introspective Oppenheimer road and apologize, truthfully. But totally hear you there! You are welcome my friend.

                  • rebellion_in_sanity

                    Thank you very much

                  • rhmn_7

                    I truly hope AI takes us far as you said, interesting perspective!

                    • rebellion_in_sanity

                      Appreciate your time and comment. I am convinced AI will take us somewhere, but not so sure if it would be a place we wanted to be. Musk and Gates both urged the world to control proliferation of AI without control - we ignored for the obvious reasons, economy.



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