Feeling trapped within these walls
as I stumble with each fall
I try to hold my head up high
so no-one ever sees me cry
But in my mind I scream with fear
painting pictures very clear
Please tell me this will go away
for it can't always be this way
I often wonder if it's me
it seems that no-one else can see
pain which dwells deep in my soul
holding tight, not letting go
Yet, these scars which I wear
tell a story I now bare
Scars I know can never heal
reminding me this is real
Tomorrow is another day
and as I stumble on my way
these voices screaming in my head
are silent whispers now instead
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Author:
teardrop (
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- Published: December 20th, 2024 06:36
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Comments6
You convey your emotions so well teardrop in your lines. No one knows the inner pain and scars that others have to endure. One can only hope that time is a healer. Wishing you a lovely day.
Cassie, sorry for the delay in my reponse. I do enjoy reading your replies and appreciate them very much. Thank you.
No problem. Hope you are ok. Have a good day.
On the positive side, if the screaming voices have now become silent whispers, hopefully that means you are the right road. A very honest and emotional poem well written.
This is a wonderful emote, teardrop. I love the way your poems flow and ring...beautiful. I have felt this way and hope that some warmth and joy fill your day. ❤️🩹
Thank you for reading me and replying. I do appreciate it very much. Sorry for the delay in replying.
No worries, my friend. It happens to me too! You are most welcome. 😊
That's the spirit .. keep your head up .. it confuses the hell out of self doubt .. Kindest Regards .. Neville 🧑🎄👍
hi Neville, thank you for reading me. Sorry it's taken me awhile to reply....I'm behind a bit but trying to catch up.
No worries at all .. My pleasure 😎👍
how beautifully broken, lovely lines
The pain is palpable. Strong write.
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