Your hand draws crazy moons on my heart
when at dusk the mount of Venus fade away
in a stellar ocean of burning sensations ...
I make a rendez vous on my planetarium of love .
A libertine invitation to some mercurial fantaisies
dancing under a shower of shooting stars .
I'd like to seduce this neptunian mermaid
with a few follies picked from a garden in the galaxy .
She has the distant sweetness of a lost dream on Sirius.
Would I be nothing more than a whirling pulsar
trapped in her own desire ?
A magnetic storm sweeps through the ship of my senses,
Saturn 's big clock goes crazy ,cosmic merry-go-round,
and the master of time is no more than a boisterous teenager...
Father jupiter yells at me in anger :
'' Come back home right away ! ''
But I flee on the path to nebulas
I won't be there for dinner !
Playing with feelings at the whim
of my lawless planetarium ..
Today I have a rendez vous
on a very exciting exo planet
whose exit I don't really know...
Andromeda champagne at supper !
O please put a spell on my soul !
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A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but so well aligned with the stars and astrology that it brought me back to earth. A lovely write of skill.
Sexy ? No just a bit sensual !
A magnificent fantasy. Artful realization of love experiences through astronomical imagery. This was an enjoyable read.
My astrophysical loves !
Great write
Thanks Tony !
You're welcome
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