In the wilderness of love
Where the fairies roam
Romeo serenades Juliet
We are one as God beholds
A resigned smile
Sadness in God's eyes
Homeless Romeo
Juliet pregnant with his child
How will love survive without a dime?
Immortal song the bard sang
Love they shared
Romanticism, an utopia we crave
It was always money, never love
Everyone chased
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Author:
Rebellion In Sanity (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 23rd, 2024 00:36
- Comment from author about the poem: Love without money - a foregone conclusion of instability
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A very different and interesting take on the Christmas story, enjoyed the read
😞 I always have been a bit of a trouble maker. 😲 Just couldn't help it.
Thanks a ton for your support
You are very welcome
Romance is always played up but in practicality love dies of starvation. A sobering darker poem of love
Your observations always help me think clearer. Thank you very much for your guidance and support
Yes true love endures all things, which is a spiritual truth for sure, but the body does not! And a dead body cannot love. “Sadness in God's eyes”. Indeed. Anger even! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
I would freely admit that the observations help me think clearly and nudge me to do better. I value your opinions/comments immensely. Thank you for taking the time to read and for sharing your valuable comments
You are welcome, my friend!
Great write
Thank you very much
You're welcome
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