Notice of absence from sheta
if im not on,im looking for an adventure
if im not on,im looking for an adventure
didn't you come?
why dont i see you
everythings done
and you're still not here
i wanted to see you
please come soon
you were sad last time i saw you
i remember now
you have forgoten me,
forsaken me!
and yet…
im happy..
because i dont need you to be happy
i only need your sister
and im fine.
its christmas eve
"Tenderness to you"
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Author:
The Adventurer (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
A most interesting write to an apparent adversary that he wishs no ill will toward. A most direct style conveys the message powerfully ut gracefully
thanks soren
In my case, I can remember men's faces, but I can hardly remember women's faces. There was a woman I made eye contact with several times around February of this year, and I was wondering who she was.
Thank you for putting the words you wanted to convey into your poems.
thanks rin
I think I know the answer.
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