when life gets you down

jim56

when life gets you down and seems such a mess
feel tired all the time causing you distress
feeling that world as gone and passed you bye
eyes they fill with tears as you begin to cry

everything around so empty so bare
feeling all alone like lifes no longer there
you can turn it round find a friend you know
tell them how your feeling let your feelings go

they will sit and listen advise you what to do
give the help you need they are there for you
you must help yourself to make life turn around
there within yourself answers can be found

  • Author: jim56 (Online Online)
  • Published: December 25th, 2024 05:31
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    Oh I’m sorry if. Your sad .. take care and happy Christmas try having a nice day

    • jim56

      im ok its just a poem that came in my head
      have a merry christmas and a happy new year

      • Caring dove

        Oh ,
        Ok .. thanks )

        • Caring dove

          It sounded like you were sad ..

          • jim56

            no im ok

          • sorenbarrett

            A wonderful poem of support and reaching out. Very nice Jim

            • jim56

              thankyou for nice comment means a lot
              merry christmas jim

            • 2781

              Good advise. Sometimes it's not that easy though.

              • jim56

                yea sometimes its not easy
                thanks for comment merry christmas

              • TobaniNataiella

                A lovely poem have how it should, nice read

                • jim56

                  thanks for comment

                  • TobaniNataiella

                    You are very welcome

                  • Cassie58

                    Losing your significant other, not so long ago must make Christmas time a difficult time of year for you Jim. I imagine it must be a time when lots of memories flood back. Having friends who can support you and help you get through these days are essential. I hope you have those when you need them most. A sad poem. Thinking about you.

                    • jim56

                      hi Cassie its hard but had family for christmas dinner
                      and grandkids played with them and the toys
                      my son and partner helped a lot. will keep marching on
                      let time do the healing take it day by day
                      hope you had a good christmas
                      and lots of mistletoe kisses
                      hope the new year is everthing you wish for
                      that it comes true for you
                      thankyou for always lovely comment
                      thinking of you keep warm keep happy stay safe jim xx



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