Sometimes, the Moon can't sleep,
For the secrets it has to keep.
Murmurs of the stars, canvas wide,
Love, the heart has to hide
Worries that are left behind
Memories in solitude to rewind.
- Salvia.S
© Salvia.S
Sometimes, the Moon can't sleep,
For the secrets it has to keep.
Murmurs of the stars, canvas wide,
Love, the heart has to hide
Worries that are left behind
Memories in solitude to rewind.
- Salvia.S
© Salvia.S
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A few words that encapsulating all the areas of our emotions and the secrets and troubles we have to travel on with. Very good read
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Good write S.
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My comments on the poem “Moonsomnia” by Salvia S
The moon is personified, it is given a personality and a life, like a human. Like a human, it needs sleep, and like a human sometimes it can’t sleep. Its secrets include hidden wishes confided to it in silence by humans on earth, eg by lovers. It also hears murmurs of the stars. Like humans, it knows solitude and rewinds thoughts of solitude.
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