Take What’s Left
Why Don't You
Take What's Left.
Then
I have nothing left to give.
No
Talk or Do
No More
You Will Leave Me
So, I Cannot Be As
I Was before.
Nataiella 1979
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Author:
Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
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Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new beginning. What is painful at the time becomes a burning of the field for a new crop. Very emotive this poem and the feeling flows out of it
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I know this feeling. I am sure the circumstances are different, but I know this feeling. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
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Excellent write
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You're welcome
Wow 😳 so poignant
Indeed.
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!!😢
Wonderful brevity my friend,
my pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
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Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out
Thank you for your comment, much appreciated, ( from many years ago)
Such a life and such is life. We do what we can until we can’t. Much enjoyed experience in poetry not so much in actually.
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Your welcome
An old write. I hope you are now in a much better place Tobani. When you reach rock bottom, the only way is up.
Thank you Cassie, an old write and any place is better than that place, Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated as always.
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