I love my wife

Demar Desu

I hate to even say my 

because I do not own or control her 

still though I love her 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 29th, 2024 22:16
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    A clever use of language to make an important point. Language quietly colors the way we see the world and my does imply ownership, a concept that shouldn't apply in relationships. Nicely written

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    I know. I hate how possessive language is. My this, their's that! Love is not one-sided ownership; it is mutuality. So, I love this because I too cringe when I say "my" [anyone]. Well done my 😬 friend. 🤣 🌹👏

  • Tony36

    Excellent write

  • vicecream

    i love you 🙂



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