Invisible

Caring dove


Notice of absence from Caring dove
Taking a break for a while . Not feeling like posting at the moment







Sometimes 

 

when we’re around others 

we feel that little bit 

invisible 

As if we’re the breeze 

there yet 

there’s no need to talk to us 

 

quiet , we may be 

No words are uttered 

 

kind like the breeze 

but for some reason 

They are not talking to us today 

 

there 

yet feeling 

that little bit 

‘ invisible ‘ 



 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 30th, 2024 08:34
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    I know this feeling and hate it. Sorry you have experienced it too and am grateful for you expressing it my friend! If I don't get to say it before hand, Happy New Year! 🌹👏

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou 🙂

      Yeah

      It’s a feeling I get sometimes

      Appreciate your kind comment

      And happy new year to you too )

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        You are most welcome! 😊

      • orchidee

        I can't say it's an invisible poem, as I can see it visibly. Good write dove.

      • Cassie58

        Hello Caring dove. Sorry to hear you are feeling this way. Hope very much you feel better soon. Wishing you a happy new year for Wednesday. 🌹

        • Caring dove

          Thanks

          And happy new year to you too 🌸

          Yeah , sometimes I notice that feeling within me but I realise that sometimes people don’t take much notice ( but it doesn’t mean there’s nethjng wrong with u )

        • TobaniNataiella

          Hoping Tomorrow is a better day for you, well worded poem.

        • Thad Wilk

          Awesome write poetess,
          I think everyone gets that
          feeling one time or another.
          True but sad, that invisible feeling...
          Thanks for sharing, so eloquently penned!!
          Best wishes Thad

          • Caring dove

            They do ..

            Thanks so much for the kind words on my poem

          • arqios

            Sometimes more than a little bit! If I’m honest, shutting up would make me feel even more invisible…all that jibber jabber that follows should be because of that. Have a great New Year!

          • Dan Williams

            "kind like the breeze " this is indeed. soft but clear. Nice.



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