Notice of absence from arqios
an absence of Presence conjures Absenceβ¦
an absence of Presence conjures Absenceβ¦
In the still of night,
. . . a voice
becomes Dawn's first light
Where every shadow meets its end
Reverie ascends skyward:
a final page turned
, weary lines
of hope, once written
now unwind
Until this day comes
, we seek our peace
Never again lost
. . . in darkened sleep.
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- Published: January 1st, 2025 03:06
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Good write A.
Thanks ππ» o π
Love this poem!
Thank you ππ»
You're welcome!
You are a poet if you are quietly lost in thought.
It's obvious.
Sometimes in thought and then get lost or the other way around, lost and then caught in thoughtβ¦ no escape either way π€£ππ» Thanks kindly ππ»
Beautiful and something I too truly wish. πΉ
Yes. ππ»Thank you Teddy ππ»
Double edged sword in a poetic way, enjoyed the read, nice start to the year.
Yes! So glad you pointed that out, double edged sword, tightrope walking, and other like scenariosβ¦ thatβs how it feels at times, most times. Thanks kindly for your continued support. ππ»
You are very welcome
This sounds almost Biblical "God is light" in John and in the gospel of John "In the beginning was the word" In a prophetic way it casts its metaphor. The last lines are my favorite
"Never again lost
. . . in darkened sleep."
Now that you mention it, that observation makes so much sense. Perhaps I am edging towards that divine light, quite the holy grail of the past several decades, what with ohms and ahms inclusive. I like the last bit too! It has an after image, the remains after weβve turned and continued on our way. Thanks kindly ππ»
Beautiful thoughts. Happy new year arqios. All the best.
Thanks Cassie! ππ»ππ»π₯³ππ
Wonderful thought and here's to 2025. I'm hoping, despite what I know to be coming in my country, that the year itself turns out to be okay-ish! Anything above that will be jam spread on toast! π€£ Happy New Year to you, my dear friend! β€οΈ
Hope is contagious! Happy New Year π₯³ππππ»
Tremendous work.
Thanks TWCππ»
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