I don't want a rose

rin

If it has thorns
Cacti are good
There's something about it that the eye can't see
If you play music
The cacti put on their sunglasses
And start dancing merrily

 
 

 

 

  • Author: rin (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 1st, 2025 01:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: used DeepL
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  • arqios

    And they do have the moves! 🎢🌡🎡 🌡 🎢🌡

    • rin

      I originally had an image of a white rose in my mind, but before I knew it, it had changed to a black rose.
      When I looked up the words for two flowers, I found that white rose had a wonderful meaning, but black rose had a negative meaning.
      So I came up with the idea and decided to use a Cacti.
      Yeah!

      • arqios

        Good choice, they are fun!

      • TobaniNataiella

        A dancing Cacti now that is a fun thought, enjoyed the read

        • rin

          thank you. It's always encouraging to read this

          • TobaniNataiella

            You are very welcome

          • sorenbarrett

            Old as I am I have seen that meme. Maybe the desert rose that is a cactus A most fun read

            • rin

              It wouldn't be strange if the king of the desert asked his vassal to look for a rose, and what his vassal brought was a cactus flower.

            • Cassie58

              I love the idea of cacti in sunglasses dancing. What fun. Cacti can take the heat, extreme heat, but they are hardly fragrant. Roses aren’t so durable. Most roses have thorns, but look how beautiful they are. A decent gardener knows how to look after his roses, thorns and all. Happy new year rin.

              • rin

                I have a rose in my garden, and when I cut off a dead flowering branch, it blooms again from the side of the branch, and I can enjoy it for a long time.
                Roses are lovely, but I adopted cacti, remembering that I have killed cacti in the past.

                • Cassie58

                  You are a gardener. Your roses bloom. 😊

                • LP2187

                  Cacti do things we can ever see. But that's why I distrust them. You never know they might be plotting to stab you to death. A nice poem though, I enjoyed it.

                  • rin

                    When you grow a cactus, you feel love for it. But I have no idea what the cactus thinks of me. I certainly think your opinion is valid.Thank you for reading!

                    • LP2187

                      You're welcome!



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