Jesus Christ was born
But they were twins
The carpenter's father gave the baby on the right as Jesus
But God chose the baby on the left
Their twin children have grown up
The false Jesus went on the path of religion
The real Jesus followed the path of a carpenter
The real Jesus was blessed by God and lived a happy life
The false Jesus suffered a series of hardships and was finally executed
But the false Jesus was resurrected
I wonder why
In any case, it was true that a miracle had happened
- Author: rin ( Offline)
- Published: January 2nd, 2025 07:47
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A thought provoking thought that explores the idea of being the real you and yet not seen. It is the fake or false that the world looks for. Oh well just my interpretation and there are many more I'm sure.
Your interpretation is yours and I think it's valid. I would appreciate it if you could give me various interpretations, as this would increase the value of this poem.
Interesting concept, I put my money on Jesus the carpenter.
The contrast is clear.
"Because strait is the gate, and narrow is the way, which leadeth unto life, and few there be that find it."
The twin was an imposter, he gets uprooted.
I'm really happy that you added a new story to my poems. thank you.
In the Hebrew and Latin American cultures there are several thousand persons named Jesus… everyone eventually picks a Jesus that suits them personally.
It seems so. Who would have thought that an ordinary name could become the most famous name in the world?
There are prophecies about that happening and it has. Every belief system has a sacred set of writings, or once had or will have. But every eye will see and every tongue will confess… still wondering how that prophecy will actually look like when it’s day is ripe!
A thought provoking piece that i am sure will have many answers, enjoyed the read.
We can think about what God was thinking and what the false Jesus accomplished. Thank you for enjoying it.
You are very welcome
This is in line with the Rudolf Steiner's theory .
I didn't know about Rudolf Steiner, but I looked it up and found out he's an amazing person. I have also written super-sensory hiragana poems in the past. I didn't know that.
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