Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโt know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโt know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!
I didn't recognize her
when she walked in
I know I hate her
for no reason at all
shes the sister of him
the man that ruined me
another cousin of mine
her makeup and dress
all done to be trendy
telling me I look pretty
broken in a hospital bed
I shouldn't hate her
she spoke first to her mom
told her of his sins
but every time I see her
I know deep in my heart
that somehow she loves him
and it tears me apart.
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I can feel the emotions, which are rich in this poem my friend. Raw and honest. Well done! ๐น๐
thank you
You are most welcome!
Raw, open and full of gut wrenching emotion. This poem is difficult to take in its honesty and sadness. It shows sensitivity to the emotional needs of others in contradiction to their own. Complex and courageous in its expression. A tough read. Bravo
thank you so much
I can see the emotion put into this piece, good write NinjaGirl. ๐
thank you!
A very honest and emotional read, hope you are on the mend. Happy New Year To You and All
thank you my friend! I am, appreciate your thoughts!
You are very welcome
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