Old vs New year [2024/2025]

NafisaSB

Its farewell to the old year

And welcome to the new one

Its ‘thank God’ for the old year

And best wishes for the new one.

It’s a permanent adieu to the old year

And bright hopes for the new one

It’s a tear for the old year

And a smile for the new one

It was ‘tough time’ in the last year

But should be ‘smooth sailing’ in the new one

It was a royal kick to the old year

And an obsequious obeisance to the new one.

  • Author: safina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2025 00:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: happy new year 2025 to one and all - stay safe, healthy and happy
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 33
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  • mvvenkataraman

    Nice poem with simple words,
    Can be understood with ease,
    Conveys very fine thoughts,
    Thanks a lot for sharing !

    • NafisaSB

      thank you - hope the start was good, and it continues through the year

    • TobaniNataiella

      A nice uplifting poem with a positive message, enjoyed the read

      • NafisaSB

        glad you did - have many wonderful days ahead

      • sorenbarrett

        A great pairing of old and new in this poem. Nicely done and a Happy New Year to you as well

        • NafisaSB

          actually the year was truly enlightening in many ways, and did have lots of benefits, which i hope will continue through the year, not just for me, but for each of you too
          have a beautiful weekend

        • arqios

          Happy new year safina! So good to start the year right and bright 🙏🏻

          • NafisaSB

            yes - the year has indeed started on a positive note, and i hope the trend continues for me, and all fellow poets
            have a good day

          • arqios

            • NafisaSB

              enjoy and stay safe

            • Tony36

              Great write

              • NafisaSB

                thank you - glad you liked it
                have a lovely day, and an awesome year ahead

                • Tony36

                  You're welcome

                • Cassie58

                  Out with the old and in with the new. Whatever the disappointments of the old year, there is hope for better in the days ahead. A positive outlook. Happy new year Safina to you and yours. All good wishes. I enjoyed reading you and your message.

                  • NafisaSB

                    thank you so much dear - i always look forward to hearing from your side, and am sending you positive vibes that will last you, and all of us in this forum through the years ahead
                    have a beautiful and blessed weekend, and keep smiling - future is truly bright



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