lifes roundabout

jim56

life is like a roundabout round and round it goes
where it takes you to no one ever knows
spinning round in circles spinning round each day
never knowing what life will bring your way

a  never ending roundabout that spins its life away
going round in circles  spinning every day
round and round it goes for each and everyone
the circle of life  that helps us carry on

  • Author: jim56 (Online Online)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2025 05:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    That doesn’t sound very nice

    • jim56

      thanks for comment

    • sorenbarrett

      Been in round abouts and if you don't know where your getting off you go around again. Planning is paramount. Also reminds me of a roulette wheel never knowing what number it will end up on. A great read Jim

      • jim56

        hi thanks for lovely comment as always have a great year jim

      • TobaniNataiella

        As long as it stops every now and then to have a break, before we go round again, enjoyed the read.

        • jim56

          thanks for comment have a great year

          • TobaniNataiella

            You too

          • Tony36

            Excellent write Jim

            • jim56

              thankyou for comment happy new year

              • Tony36

                You're welcome

              • arqios

                Superbly dizzying!

                • jim56

                  thankyou for comment have a great new year

                  • arqios

                    A great new year to yo too, Jim! 👍🏻🕊

                  • Mutley Ravishes

                    Led Zeppelin have a song, “Nobody’s Fault But Mine” which is pausetastic!

                    • jim56

                      thanks for comment



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