bright cold
dark warmth
nature building
future memory
unknown past
no music playing
words the song doesn't say
weakness of strength
trash can treasure chest
last first
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Author:
rin (
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Such a poignant reflection on the contrasts and nuances that shape our lives, thought provoking interplay of opposites! Such is life.
life is beautiful. thank you.
Thank you also for visiting and responding to my latest works 🙏🏻
Opposite in all things. This is the balance. Very nice
It's not as creative as your poem, but I wrote it my own way. Thank you for reading.
You can't compare an apple with an orange they both have their own flavor.
"future memory / unknown past" has quite the nice ring to it!
thank you. I thought the two sentences had to be paired, so I wrote them. Thank you for focusing on the good points.
I very much like the poem itself, some of the "opposites" I hadn't thought of! They seem to be slight opposites, almost like a slant rhyme. I do really like it, fantastic job!
A few words that ask a lot of questions, enjoyed the read
Your poems have always become an experience in my heart, not just words. I think that this experience is probably utilized in this poem as well. Thank you for enjoying it.
You are very welcome
A poem of opposites. That sort of balances things out rin.
no music playing grabbed me. That would be a tragedy. Just a few thoughts.
I think that's fine. The impressions that occur when reading a poem are the chemical reaction of the words, and the emotions of the person.
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