My heart is beating
I'm doing artificial respiration
I'm thinking
AI is working
People are living like humans
We're at war
I can't stop kissing
We're trying to get into the Guinness World Records
There's warmth without love
It's no different from a stove
There's kindness without gentleness
It's fighting the enemy with kindness outside the concept of kindness
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rin (
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Clever and human even the note fit in. There are things that Ai is not yet prepared to do. The human difference between the literal and the subjective is still lacking. If that is ever achieved we will have become god of a superior species and one to be feared,
It's interesting to think that there is something lacking in humans, which symbolically indicates that they are not gods. Your thoughts are excellent.
There is a lot humans are lacking and hopefully will remain so, it would not be good if a human became a god, Enjoyed the read
Because you write the poem, I can write the poem without feeling the need to write in the same vector. I always use it as a reference.
have a good weekend
I really like this poem as it has contrast between us (that we feel emotions) and AI (programmed to be logical). Warmth without love is meaningless. Even though we have the potential to be such kind and compassionate people, we can still inflict pain and suffering through war. Such a nice read, I enjoyed it!
Your comments are very thought-provoking. Because the letters written by soldiers of the World Wars are still there, and they are full of love and warmth. Thank you for your interesting comments.
You’re welcome.
DeepL is meant to be the best, for the time being. I’m sure someone will up their game in no time.
DeepL is too literal and sometimes does not translate entire sentences. There is room for technological development.
I agree!
There’s warmth without love, it’s no different from a stove. That line spoke to me. Where there is love, there will always be warmth. Robots don’t do love and warmth. They don’t do emotions. They are programmed for logic. God help us, if that should ever change. Thought provoking write rin.
There is a sense of love and warmth in the words you use for your loved ones in your poems. That's both wonderful and sad.
Thank you for reading.
RIn are you an I.A ? quite questionable !
What is I.A? You have so much knowledge, there are so many things I would like to research.
BRAVO
Yay!
Thank you!
You're welcome
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