sometimes too wide the sky.
at best comes one assuming light,
by high ordeal, the flight of fancy grows.
unto ourselves be true beyond the mark.
where heaven is, only heaven knows;
sometimes too strong the wind.
one soul unto oneself no enemy.
by our own hands no touch that cannot reach
unto ourselves be stronger than the ox.
all we have is all that we can teach;
sometimes too cold the rain.
for all who took to shelter
in the valley of the breast,
unto ourselves be gentle honest men.
for he who has such knowledge,
knows her best;
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Melvin James (Pseudonym) (
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Your poetry is outstanding ovation always, only through knowledge can we teach. Where heaven is only heaven knows, stunning and so very much appreciate that you share your soulful poetry dearest Melvin. A standing ovation my dear friend. 🌹
Cast in metaphor and symbolism is the feeling of gentleness. Very nice
too wide the sky
too strong the wind
too cold the rain
this poem which has many beautiful lines speaks to me about weighing up situations and making sensible decisions.
be true and honest to yourself , that is the best you can do, is what comes across to this reader
the time has to be right to make changes. I like very much the references to the natural environment. Wonderful poetry Melvin.
"all we have is all that we can teach"
Wise words and a wise poem, my friend. Wonderfully written, Melvin! 🌹👏
When life is all said and done, if we can stand hand on heart and say i was true and honest to ourself and others, than that is all we can ask. A beautiful poem, that was a real pleasure to read.
Where heaven is only heaven knows. I really liked this line. Death is either a dreamless sleep or another consciousness. Only heaven knows.
Beautiful. Outstanding work.
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