Writing all these poems
I think I finally found myself
And I also learnt to write
Much better poems
Rather than those
That always circled
Around death
Like bloodthirsty eagles
Around prey
Diving down
And attacking
But now I know
That my poems
Can actually make
Me feel good too
But of course
I do like a
Little bit of
Negativity
Every now
And then…
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Glad someone's found it! I'm having a spot of trouble. I don't know what I'm looking for, so how will I know when I've found it?! heehee. Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido.
Yet we do that - not knowing what we're looking for sometimes, but when we find it, we say 'Ah, that's what I was looking for'.
Yeah, somehow we know when we find it. But usually I have no clue. Thank you!
The evolution of ones poems reflects the growth of the poet and his or her mood. Nicely done
Thank you so much
Sometimes the best things are found by accident, reading and writing does alter your mood for the better in the long run, and is it negativity or reality?, enjoyed the read. My own writing code is, do not write to please, write what you believe.
Perhaps it is reality, but sometimes what I believe people might hate and I don't want hate... hopefully there's no hate on here. But thank you very much, I appreciate you.
You are very welcome ( i have not seen any)
Life is a mixed basket and that should reflect in our poetry; at least that the way my thoughts go! Makes for a well-rounded existence. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Thanks a lot, I agree. Hope you liked it.
Excellent write
thank you
You're welcome
we all love a good moody poem...but I'm so glad we can find pieces of ourselves in the writing we express.
yeah our true selves start to emerge
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