The look of freedom the taste of fire all pain and darkness disappears you are the star falls from afar you are the noise in the silence the pin in the moving hand of time
The look of freedom the taste of fire all pain and darkness disappears you are the star falls from afar you are the noise in the silence the pin in the moving hand of time
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Good write M.
A vivid picture of moving from darkness to freedom. Poignant indeed, I loved this.
Moving out of the darkness, what a wonderful feeling, enjoyed the read
This is such a beautiful encapsulation of the transformative and omnipresent nature of freedom. It highlights how freedom can transcend pain and darkness, becoming a guiding star and a defining moment in the continuum of time. Thanks for sharing 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
Beautiful
very beautiful, I absolutely love the imagery
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