An Ode to the Day

rebellion_in_sanity

At the end of the day
When the Sun prepares to set
Birds fly in hordes seeking their nests

 

Leaves dance so lovingly,
To the music of gentle breeze 
Tall grasses take bows 
Like artists reluctant to leave

 

Dusk creeps in
Streetlight begin to glow
Playful dance of dark snd light
People hurrying to reach home

 

Another day has gone by
The image will fade in time
Sitting on the porch
A cool glass of drink in hand
Bidding adieu to the old

 

Maybe tomorrow,
Unheard shall be told
Maybe tomorrow,
Unknown shall become known 
But tonight,
Steeped in the darkness of billion starlights
Let us savor the bittersweet memories

  • Author: Rebellion In Sanity (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 6th, 2025 08:15
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  • sorenbarrett

    There is always tomorrow and its promise. A most romantic poem with ending hope

    • rebellion_in_sanity

      Thank you very much! It's heartening to know that you liked it. Appreciate your continued guidance and encouragement

    • Cassie58

      Very nicely composed stanzas. Beautiful images of the natural world created and a sense of poignant mystery added to keep the reader guessing on those bittersweet memories. Much enjoyed ris.

      • rebellion_in_sanity

        I experienced a strange sense of fulfillment reading your comments. Thank you very much 🙏. Deeply appreciate your support

      • arqios

        So soothing specially at the end of a long day’s toil! Much enjoyed 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

        • rebellion_in_sanity

          Thank you very much for the read and your comments. Appreciate your support 🙏

          • arqios

            You’re very welcome 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

          • TobaniNataiella

            Being grated for the day that just passed and hoping tomorrow is even better, enjoyed the read.

            • rebellion_in_sanity

              Thank you very much for the read and your comments. Appreciate your support 🙏

              • TobaniNataiella

                You are very welcome

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Hope is born on the wings of tomorrow. That said, who knows what it holds, who knows what doesn't, but for now...let's just enjoy the moment. I love the message. A wonderful write, my friend!

                • rebellion_in_sanity

                  Many thanks for the read and the comment which captures the essence of the spirit. Truly appreciate your support 🙏

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    You are welcome! 😊



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