would you take me as i am?

sheta


Notice of absence from sheta
if im not on,im looking for an adventure

would you take me as i am,

 

broken and shattered

 

would you take me as i am,

 

needing love?

 

would you take me as i am,

 

even if i didn't lie to myself that you lived me

 

cause thats the way its gonna be!

 

cant you see the way i see

 

when you're staring straight back at me

  • Author: The Adventurer (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 7th, 2025 14:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: to my new crush
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 30
  • Users favorite of this poem: rin
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Comments5

  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed

    • sheta

      thanks

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • ᛕꫀƺꫀ᥊᥊ꫀ

        N-n-new??

      • rin

        In my case, I have no idea what the current state of the person I know is, but as long as they love me, there are no other conditions. I think that's normal.
        Also, I've lost more than half of my past life's mental experiences, so it's not normal, but I don't know if anyone would say that's okay.

      • Lorenz

        Demons are good boys ! It's better to make a deal with !

        • sheta

          hahaha ya i agree

        • rin

          If you're talking about me, it's probably someone I know. Then I love you. There's no need to act.

          • sheta

            rin if you were a boy you would be my new crush hah

            • rin

              I was confused. Sorry

              • sheta

                its ok haha



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