Out of control
Hands off the wheel
Can I do what I feel?
How can I change
It's all on track
Just sit back and relax...
Can I say
Please don't go
I really do enjoy the show
It's a real paradox
No one knows what is what
That includes me!
Can I see the end?
Glory be...
Redeem the time
What mine is yours
And what's yours is mine.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 8th, 2025 01:09
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Comments4
Sometimes we trie too hard to control what is happening around us and don't just sit back and enjoy the ride. No one likes a back seat driver. Nicely done
What a poem outing the tension between control and surrender, connection and isolation, clarity and confusion. It resonates with the universal quest for meaning and understanding in the face of life's unpredictability. We a,l are searching for something… 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
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BRAVO
feels like a certain "Jesus take the wheel!" moment! beautiful poem!
You got it...
Go girl!
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