A multitude of stars
Blinked an eye
Upon first kiss
Of Winter sky.
The frozen gravel
Beneath my feet
Wheezed in pain
My step to greet.
The hazy vision
From watery eyes
Upon such path
Gently sighs.
As infants dream
Such wondrous dreams
Old men in memory
Thoughts are streamed.
Distant cottage
A burning light
At windows lattice
Upon the sight.
A multitude of stars
Blinked an eye
Upon first kiss
Of Winter sky.
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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Now that is a poem that nature sings. Liked and Faved! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
you are very kind, thanking you
BRAVO
you are very kind, thanks
You're welcome
I loved the stanza
"As infants dream
Such wondrous dreams
Old men in memory
Thoughts are streamed."
A most beautiful poem
many thanks . much appreciated
That is a beautifully written poem that makes you feel warm and happy, really enjoyed the read
thanking you for those kind words, much appreciated
You are very welcome
This is awesome. I really like the short stanza style and rhyming patterns. Tells the story with great imagery also. "Upon first kiss, of winter sky". Very pretty to imagine.
most kind, thanking you
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