take away today

jim56

take away today.  let tomorrow take its place
hope it will be better   one that you can face
one that makes you happy brings a smile once more
then you can say goodbye to the day before

hope it is the start of  of things that lie ahead
sadness it has gone theres happiness instead
make each day tomorrow do what you want it to
good times lie ahead waiting there for you

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  • arqios

    Liked the pauses and spaces at just the right spots! Good stuff, jim!

    • jim56

      thankyou for comment means a lot

      • arqios

        Most welcome jim πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ» You’re comments mean a lot as well 😊

      • sorenbarrett

        This one Jim was not only good advice and upbeat but very clever in its wording, This could easily be a song. Worth a Fave

        • jim56

          hi thankyou for always lovely comment
          means a lot have great year jim

        • Tony36

          Excellent write Jim

          • jim56

            thankyou for comment means a lot

            • Tony36

              You're welcome Jim

              • jim56

                THANKS

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Wonderful Jim. This poem rings very hopeful and true. Well done. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

                • jim56

                  thankyou for comment means a lot

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    You are welcome, Jim!

                  • 2781

                    When bad is here I think good is coming.

                    • jim56

                      best way to be
                      thankyou for comment



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