take away today. let tomorrow take its place
hope it will be better one that you can face
one that makes you happy brings a smile once more
then you can say goodbye to the day before
hope it is the start of of things that lie ahead
sadness it has gone theres happiness instead
make each day tomorrow do what you want it to
good times lie ahead waiting there for you
- Author: jim56 ( Online)
- Published: January 8th, 2025 07:13
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments5
Liked the pauses and spaces at just the right spots! Good stuff, jim!
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Most welcome jim ππ»πππ» Youβre comments mean a lot as well π
This one Jim was not only good advice and upbeat but very clever in its wording, This could easily be a song. Worth a Fave
hi thankyou for always lovely comment
means a lot have great year jim
Excellent write Jim
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You're welcome Jim
THANKS
Wonderful Jim. This poem rings very hopeful and true. Well done. πΉπ
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You are welcome, Jim!
When bad is here I think good is coming.
best way to be
thankyou for comment
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