Why do I see you everywhere?
Why do I see you everywhere?
Every path I tread on keeps asking me of you.
Why is a moment of love more valuable than an entire life?
Why is it so, Oh Lord?
There's a void in my heart,
I am lonely without you,
I can feel your presence EVERYWHERE-
but you are NOWHERE!
You are unaware you are around every bend.
All I want to know-
Why did you change like the weather?
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Author:
Brian Otucho (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 8th, 2025 09:39
- Category: Love
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Comments2
A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of the rest and is unexpected and adds splendor to the piece
Nice, thank you. 👍🙏
i really resonate with this poem. i have been feeling the same way about someone. your writing style is straightforward but leaves an impact. it is heart-wrenching. well done!
Thank you, and welcome to mypoeticside _ MPS
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