The evening angel

Lorenz

I'ts a day  that ends in the turmoil of a disordered planet .

My mind wanders in search of some perfect architecture

before the sandman put little children to sleep ...

I feel outside the carnal boundaries of this  world 

which is nothing more than a lost suburb of boredom...

Stardust in the hair of time and so many eras 

 dead and to be decided ...

Inspired matter in perfect mother mechanics 

melody of the spheres in the cosmic ocean's flow...

In this blur of day and night entwined ,

gentle caress of a moment of grace and contemplation,

feeling of fulness lost in the musicality of a celestial  clavichord,

that only souls open to the infinite om can perceive.

 Delightful  chore ,spirit of the perfect voice,exquisite rondo...

 Wolfgang descends from his cloud ,reborn from eternity...

 The smiling evening angel opening their arms to me ...

 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 13th, 2025 15:57
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  • sorenbarrett

    Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this piece. Music closely related to poetry strikes a chord, Very nice

    • Lorenz

      great musical sensitivity !

    • Tony36

      Great write

      • Lorenz

        Thank you. to answer the question : Angels have no gender !

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Ellen Marsell

          It is a poetic meditation on the intersection of time, space and spirituality. It is imbued with a sense of transcendence, a desire to transcend the ordinary, to touch something eternal and immeasurably beautiful.

          • Ellen Marsell

            For me, this piece is like a walk through a twilight forest.

            • Lorenz

              I met the evening angel at Exki !

              • Lorenz

                Thanks for suggesting the elegant '' clavichord'' to replace the modern ''keyboard" !

                • Ellen Marsell

                  You're welcome! 😊



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