see the red
all around
the edges
of vision
taste the
metallic
unleash
the red
let it out
to fight
or to kill
know not
yet but all
one needs
is to keep
the rage
to keep
on fighting.
see the red
all around
the edges
of vision
taste the
metallic
unleash
the red
let it out
to fight
or to kill
know not
yet but all
one needs
is to keep
the rage
to keep
on fighting.
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Excellent write
thank you!
You're welcome
You're welcome
Such a good poem about anger
thank you so much!
Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem rage. Better to let it out a little at a time before hand. I could sense the anger in this poem.
yes, I don't know that I've ever actually "seen red" but it's more like an intense heat
Rage. Indeed one sees red. I have been there. Poetry is a GREAT way to let it out, actually...not that I need to tell you that, because that is exactly what you are doing here. Well done, my friend! This is a brilliant expression of an emotion we all try to hide ourselves away from. You, on the other hand, have embraced it...and there's power in that! That's the first step, in my opinion, to controlling it. I find that emotions control us the more we try to deny them. Anyway, well done NinjaGirl! Red slayed! 🌹👏
hahaha, seriously! poetry, movement, or burning things. if I embrace too much of my anger, I might become a supervillain, so let's try not to go that far... thanks for reading and commenting!
🤣 For sure. Anti-hero is the best place to stay! Write, move, and burn away! You are most welcome, my friend. ❤️
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