Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!
see the red
all around
the edges
of vision
taste the
metallic
unleash
the red
let it out
to fight
or to kill
know not
yet but all
one needs
is to keep
the rage
to keep
on fighting.
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NinjaGirl (
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Comments3
Excellent write
thank you!
You're welcome
You're welcome
Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem rage. Better to let it out a little at a time before hand. I could sense the anger in this poem.
yes, I don't know that I've ever actually "seen red" but it's more like an intense heat
Rage. Indeed one sees red. I have been there. Poetry is a GREAT way to let it out, actually...not that I need to tell you that, because that is exactly what you are doing here. Well done, my friend! This is a brilliant expression of an emotion we all try to hide ourselves away from. You, on the other hand, have embraced it...and there's power in that! That's the first step, in my opinion, to controlling it. I find that emotions control us the more we try to deny them. Anyway, well done NinjaGirl! Red slayed! 🌹👏
hahaha, seriously! poetry, movement, or burning things. if I embrace too much of my anger, I might become a supervillain, so let's try not to go that far... thanks for reading and commenting!
🤣 For sure. Anti-hero is the best place to stay! Write, move, and burn away! You are most welcome, my friend. ❤️
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